Edit 2: The original artist of the whitewashed picture submitted a corrected version here: [link]
This is how you react to being called out on whitewashing! No excuses, just a correction! That's how to be a good person. Very commendable!!!
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This was inspired by my desire to fix this whitewashed picture: [link]
Seriously folks, if you're drawing people of color, don't lighten our skin/draw our features white. Otherwise we'll take vengeance by redo-ing all of your whitewashed pictures.
It looks great! I'm impressed. The one thing I see wrong is their facial features all look the same. You might want to try on differentiating. It'll give them more character. I think the lighting looks good, but I can't tell if Yue is spirit or human. Her hair is glowing, but her skin isn't moon pale as it would be as a spirit. You might want to think about that. Other than that, everything looks good. I love the way you found a balance in how many lines to put in the hair. I also like how you reflected the blue onto the skin. Looks great
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